Could somebody rate these rap/grime lyrics?

they arent about anything, i suppose u could get away with it nowdays if u have a half decent flow and cant pronounce words (sarcasm) but u should have substance in lyrics, or at least in most songs. out of 10? id give a 6, but thats really good for first lyrics. rhymes are all right, and u have potential, keep trying. i just suggest that u put lines in a logical fashion so it looks more organized and is easier to read when ur actually rapping. also, verses are usually the same, but it doesnt matter that much.